First major try at fanfic. Constructive criticism
This story is about a small group of friends who work as
mercenaries, (caravan guards, messengers and the like) and their
adventure through the MGQ world. It begins a few weeks before Luka
starts his journey to defeat the Monster Lord.
The Steel Walkers ==
convoy was progressing at walking pace on the road, as the trolleys
could not go faster without letting the persons on foot behind. It
was particularly important in this forest, since it marked the
beginning of monster's territory. The last man following just
didn't care, as he was too focused on his own thoughts.
responsible who hired them was insistent on it : they were
going in a region where monsters whe…